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Re: You, Yourself, and Shut Up
Good poem. I agree with Dargquon...
Dec 8, 2005 -
Re: September 11
damit i just wrote two pages on this and accidentally deleted them. :evil:
Dec 6, 2005 -
Re: This War
Thanks...
Dec 6, 2005 -
Re: This War
I'm new here so I don't know all of the forum's intricacies yet. Thanks for the grammarical advice...I'll correct the poem.
Dec 5, 2005 -
Re: This War
Anything? Any comment, constructive criticism,ect. is welcome...
Dec 5, 2005 -
Re: Santa Clause is God (and it's a myth that he gives coal)
How does this fit in with the title?
Dec 4, 2005 -
Re: Asher
Very good! I liked it a lot. Suspenseful ending... makes me want more.
Dec 4, 2005 -
Re: new project, title pending... (I)
Very good!! The begining is a bit abrupt, but the end more than makes up for it. As for everything in between-awesome.
Dec 4, 2005 -
Re: I'm the Guy
I'm the guy that you will NEVER notice.. (: Nice poem, man, well written .
Dec 4, 2005